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Promise Me (Other) by Taco I don't need a pile of cash,
I don't need a ring,
I don't need a place to stay,
I don't need anything.
Just promise me that you'll be there
whenever i'm in need;
And promise me that when I write,
you'll take the time to read.
Promise me that when we meet
you'll hug and hold me tight;
And stay with me until I go,
if only for one night.
I may not seem very smart,
to love you in this way;
But you're the one who loves me,
so for you, I will stay.
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Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.8333333
Posted: July 3, 2005 11:37 PM PDT; Last modified: July 3, 2005 11:52 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.686235 Overall Rank: 12091 Comments:
You're right, it's not smart to love in this way. Unless this is poking fun at people who do, and I don't see hints of that, it is shallow.
bleeech.
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add two beats to line four of S-3