| Re: Bad grammar and spelling mistakes by Damien |
19-Apr-05/7:44 AM |
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Damien is a fitting name because you are the Antichrist of poetry.
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| Re: My Time In Jail by Brittanyy |
4-Feb-05/6:20 AM |
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Who says "coppers"? What are you living in a 1930's crime saga?
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| Re: a comment on Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent) by Crakyamuni |
3-Feb-05/10:40 AM |
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I have no delusions that I have an ounce of talent in the field of poetry. I do, however, know poetry. Being unable to write does not mean being unable to read.
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| Re: Pictures of June by wilco |
3-Feb-05/10:36 AM |
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I like this. I have no idea what it's about, but I like it.
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| Re: Welcome To Croatia by Caducus |
3-Feb-05/10:34 AM |
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-1 because this is really kind of boring, but it's beautifully said.
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| Re: Enrapture by fevriere |
3-Feb-05/10:08 AM |
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This doesn't really make any sense, but it sounds ok.
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| Re: Save our Self(revised to be a trek into the vent tent) by Crakyamuni |
2-Feb-05/1:08 PM |
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Ok, how's this: It makes sense, it just sucks. :0)
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| Re: a comment on Life by AmberDawn |
2-Feb-05/1:06 PM |
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Tottaly without trying to be mean, this is not the place to find helpful criticism. You may get a little from a few users, but mostly you will find crass, bitter poet who will berate you until the end of time.
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| Re: Friends without Faces by Sunshine Conkey |
26-Jan-05/12:31 PM |
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| Re: a comment on The Playground by Caducus |
21-Jan-05/1:06 PM |
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| Re: black dog by wilco |
21-Jan-05/1:04 PM |
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lamplights should be lamplight's
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| Re: a comment on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina |
8-Dec-04/10:12 AM |
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Everyones life follows logic. Almost always to the point of being illogical. Now, get down to the market and get yourself some camel poo for the Mrs. to cook up for your supper.
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| Re: Beth by horus8 |
15-Sep-04/12:32 PM |
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| Re: What greater love by daggatolar |
15-Sep-04/11:14 AM |
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| Re: Band Ten Hut by LintyWeenis |
15-Sep-04/11:10 AM |
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| Re: Holocaust by Mr Pig |
15-Sep-04/11:09 AM |
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| Re: A Great Story by Krys |
15-Sep-04/11:07 AM |
"We are all back to normal
We've gotten rid of our fears"
"But we haven't forgotten"
Exactly where do you live that this is the case?
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