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The Playground

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Nov 2004 · Edited 20 Jan 2005 · 2 comments

Ghosts in the paddling pool Cursing where once I played Peeling away my childhood Like flecks of paint From the moaning carousel. Their anger in hock and foam Bleeds through names on glistening chrome ‘Colin is a queer’ ‘Jane is a slag’ ‘Death to all Pakis’ (next to the union jack) written by parents through their children’s hand To show them the way to the promised land. I leave the playground Which left me years ago Replaced by ghosts and no-one I know Who haunt the tenement knoll Buying dreams from gold toothed genies they sell out childhood for a gram of dream is a small price to pay at the shopping mall.

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[8] Dovina 26-Nov-04/6:11 PM Reply
Dear Poemranking addicts,

How do you get onto poemranker? Over the past five days, I have tried five computers, mac's and PC's, dial-up, DSL, and cable modem, all with no connection to poemranker, or as today only after waiting an hour just to get logged in.

The problem is at kaolin's end, and I have emailed him twice, with no answer. I suppose that if he flakes out, dies, or loses the server for some reason, then poemranker and everything on it dies.

I wish I had copied more of what seemed important here before the thing died. Now its too late unless by some slim chance it comes back up.

Sorry to bleed all over your poem, but it's the only page that came up.

I will miss some of you, and think about some you in other ways,

Bye,
Dovina
[n/a] Bluemonkey › Dovina 21-Jan-05/1:06 PM Reply
I've had no problem.