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The Playground (Free verse) by Caducus Ghosts in the paddling pool
Cursing where once I played
Peeling away my childhood
Like flecks of paint
From the moaning carousel.
Their anger in hock and foam
Bleeds through names on glistening chrome
âColin is a queerâ
âJane is a slagâ
âDeath to all Pakisâ
(next to the union jack)
written by parents through their childrenâs hand
To show them the way to the promised land.
I leave the playground
Which left me years ago
Replaced by ghosts and no-one I know
Who haunt the tenement knoll
Buying dreams from gold toothed genies
they sell out childhood
for a gram of dream is
a small price to pay at the shopping mall.
Up the ladder:
untitled # 3
Down the ladder:
spiderweb
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Posted: November 26, 2004 3:31 AM PST; Last modified: January 20, 2005 8:20 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.2689414 Overall Rank: 3884 Comments:
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I will miss some of you, and think about some you in other ways,
Bye,
Dovina