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The Playground (Free verse) by Caducus

Ghosts in the paddling pool Cursing where once I played Peeling away my childhood Like flecks of paint From the moaning carousel. Their anger in hock and foam Bleeds through names on glistening chrome ‘Colin is a queer’ ‘Jane is a slag’ ‘Death to all Pakis’ (next to the union jack) written by parents through their children’s hand To show them the way to the promised land. I leave the playground Which left me years ago Replaced by ghosts and no-one I know Who haunt the tenement knoll Buying dreams from gold toothed genies they sell out childhood for a gram of dream is a small price to pay at the shopping mall.

Bluemonkey 21-Jan-05/1:06 PM
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