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What greater love (Free verse) by daggatolar
Like the sea We take all the skying Falling all it contents For what we see is the lightflow To meat us drained The violence there is Is us - Our bank filled; breaks We flood out Not the sky We cannot rise to return What we now cherish A part of us What greater love Is this woman

Up the ladder: Temptation
Down the ladder: Every Time

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10218
Posted: September 13, 2004 11:17 AM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2004 11:17 AM PDT
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[n/a] Bachus @ 24.130.62.63 | 13-Sep-04/3:18 PM | Reply
Ha ha ha...
[2] Bluemonkey @ 170.141.68.2 | 15-Sep-04/11:14 AM | Reply
mmmm..donuts
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