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Early Morning Thought (Free verse) by Dreammaker1024
He takes my breath away. He turns my hearts desire into molten fire. I
canât imagine a greater emotion then the one I feel every time heâs
near. And yet with all that said heâs only but a companion in my
earthly journey. In my dreams heâs the passionate embrace that keeps
me warm at night, heâs the soothing song that floats through my mind.
My release of feelings for him are merely lost words scribed onto pieces
of manuscript that in time will take flight in the breeze. Beautifully
imaginative I see us having our chance, yet deep inner recesses remind
me of that opportunity long vanished. I must now learn to forget, let
go and keep my hopes never for some dreams never become actuality in
this cold and mysterious world.
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Posted: January 23, 2005 2:06 PM PST; Last modified: January 23, 2005 2:06 PM PST
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