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Topography

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 Feb 2007 · 2 comments

Calypso and apogee corrects me Order, disorder inspires Grand overtures of ink Play chords in green and gray This obsession with frailty A pitted fortress of perdition Swings from side to backside Beauty belongs in the distraction Diamond dell, we find you dry The smell brings sweet respite Wars come and go and come again Whilst the sun twirls in abstraction

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[7] Dovina 14-Feb-07/9:39 AM Reply
"Beauty belongs in the distraction" Nice line.
[5] nentwined 15-Feb-07/6:31 PM Reply
Calypso and apogee? Hmm.

Order.. and disorder--makes me miss an old techno album lost to age.

too abstract for me?