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Topography (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Calypso and apogee corrects me Order, disorder inspires Grand overtures of ink Play chords in green and gray This obsession with frailty A pitted fortress of perdition Swings from side to backside Beauty belongs in the distraction Diamond dell, we find you dry The smell brings sweet respite Wars come and go and come again Whilst the sun twirls in abstraction

nentwined 15-Feb-07/6:31 PM
Calypso and apogee? Hmm.

Order.. and disorder--makes me miss an old techno album lost to age.

too abstract for me?




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