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Early Morning Thought (Free verse) by Dreammaker1024

He takes my breath away. He turns my hearts desire into molten fire. I can’t imagine a greater emotion then the one I feel every time he’s near. And yet with all that said he’s only but a companion in my earthly journey. In my dreams he’s the passionate embrace that keeps me warm at night, he’s the soothing song that floats through my mind. My release of feelings for him are merely lost words scribed onto pieces of manuscript that in time will take flight in the breeze. Beautifully imaginative I see us having our chance, yet deep inner recesses remind me of that opportunity long vanished. I must now learn to forget, let go and keep my hopes never for some dreams never become actuality in this cold and mysterious world.

Shuushin 23-Jan-05/6:07 PM
line breaks would really help this.




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