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Free verse № 123647

Bad grammar and spelling mistakes

Member since 2005 · Posted 18 Apr 2005 · 4 comments

Try and make sense of what I give not sense of what you think I admit my crazy atitude has provoked what YOU bring BUT THATS TOUGH LUCK GET USED WHAT I WRITE cause I'me not going anywhere until I have helped, alright And yes i still see you amongst the rare honest ones Breeding a stench our stomachs can't hold long Then forcing it on us in a hypnotysing fit Just leave us in peace round the people we'r with Can you spot the mistakes are they hard to see Dont be silly Damien wrote them for me to feed

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[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom 18-Apr-05/10:25 AM Reply
Excellent control, and the title fits the body well. -8-.

<3 Jason
[10] sonawrote 18-Apr-05/9:02 PM Reply
keep it up....I'll always read what u got cummin'
[n/a] Bluemonkey 19-Apr-05/7:44 AM Reply
Damien is a fitting name because you are the Antichrist of poetry.
[n/a] Damien › Bluemonkey 22-Apr-05/7:19 AM Reply
Huh, i'm to stupid to understand this context.