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Bad grammar and spelling mistakes (Free verse) by Damien
Try and make sense of what I give not sense of what you think
I admit my crazy atitude has provoked what YOU bring
BUT THATS TOUGH LUCK GET USED WHAT I WRITE
cause I'me not going anywhere until I have helped, alright
And yes i still see you amongst the rare honest ones
Breeding a stench our stomachs can't hold long
Then forcing it on us in a hypnotysing fit
Just leave us in peace round the people we'r with
Can you spot the mistakes are they hard to see
Dont be silly Damien wrote them for me to feed
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5922
Posted: April 18, 2005 3:35 AM PDT; Last modified: April 18, 2005 3:35 AM PDT
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<3 Jason