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Free verse № 123037

Lost

Member since 2005 · Posted 5 Apr 2005 · 2 comments

She sits on the edge of her life, slashes of bitterness cut straight furrows in her face. Barren flowers lay at her feet, chilled veins living like a root in a shadow. Withering shawl covers old bones fat with deceit, the spin of her body stirring betrayal. Words sting raw in her throat, everyday the same, eating paranoia for lunch. skye (c)

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[9] Dovina 5-Apr-05/11:24 AM Reply
I've seen her, can feel her paranoia. Welcome to poemranker.
[n/a] skye 5-Apr-05/11:52 AM Reply
Thank you Dovina, so nice to meet you!
skye