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Lost (Free verse) by skye
She sits on the edge of her life, slashes of bitterness cut straight furrows in her face. Barren flowers lay at her feet, chilled veins living like a root in a shadow. Withering shawl covers old bones fat with deceit, the spin of her body stirring betrayal. Words sting raw in her throat, everyday the same, eating paranoia for lunch. skye (c)

Up the ladder: Blanket Weed
Down the ladder: The still wheel

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5902
Posted: April 5, 2005 10:25 AM PDT; Last modified: April 5, 2005 10:25 AM PDT
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[9] Dovina @ 12.72.14.10 | 5-Apr-05/11:24 AM | Reply
I've seen her, can feel her paranoia. Welcome to poemranker.
[n/a] skye @ 24.95.245.159 | 5-Apr-05/11:52 AM | Reply
Thank you Dovina, so nice to meet you!
skye
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