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Lost (Free verse) by skye
She sits on the edge of her life,
slashes of bitterness cut straight
furrows in her face.
Barren flowers lay at her feet,
chilled veins living like a root in
a shadow.
Withering shawl covers old bones
fat with deceit, the spin of her
body stirring betrayal.
Words sting raw in her throat,
everyday the same,
eating paranoia for lunch.
skye (c)
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5902
Posted: April 5, 2005 10:25 AM PDT; Last modified: April 5, 2005 10:25 AM PDT
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