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Bad grammar and spelling mistakes (Free verse) by Damien

Try and make sense of what I give not sense of what you think I admit my crazy atitude has provoked what YOU bring BUT THATS TOUGH LUCK GET USED WHAT I WRITE cause I'me not going anywhere until I have helped, alright And yes i still see you amongst the rare honest ones Breeding a stench our stomachs can't hold long Then forcing it on us in a hypnotysing fit Just leave us in peace round the people we'r with Can you spot the mistakes are they hard to see Dont be silly Damien wrote them for me to feed

Bluemonkey 19-Apr-05/7:44 AM
Damien is a fitting name because you are the Antichrist of poetry.




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