regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jul-04/8:33 AM
There wasn't enought syllables in each line . It supposed to be 10 in each. The scheme was wrong. It's ABA BCB CDC DED EE.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Jul-04/9:22 AM
Opps I thought I checked over it!
Re: Heart Cancer by shit	21-Jul-04/4:48 PM
That was very touching.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Jul-04/11:01 AM
that was horrible.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Nov-04/1:12 PM
That is a really great poem! I give you a 10
Re: Dear George Bush by scitz	19-Nov-04/6:54 PM
Your from England. How dare you judge our president. President Bush is way better than John Kerry. John Kerry had Botox injections. To me that sounds a little dumb because he doesn't look any better.
Re: The Tuesday Dogs by Caducus	18-Mar-06/1:07 PM
How sad.
Re: Holding on for Jesus by Everyone	21-Mar-06/5:51 PM
That could be a really good song!!! I love it!! 10 for sure
Re: SOMETIMES? by Garrett S Sexton	30-Mar-06/11:28 AM
I gave this a 0 because not only is this poem about shit it really is a piece of shit!
Re: Bitter by Ranger	9-Oct-07/3:34 PM
I love the way you repeat the lines but add something different afterwards! ALso, This poem makes the reader feel the narator's emotions. Love the Poem!
Re: My first wish and last by Bachus	9-Oct-07/6:06 PM
Well Put together! Love it!
Re: You are a divider by Bachus	9-Oct-07/6:07 PM
WOW!!! Imagery is effective!
Re: Children in the Storm by thepinkbunnyofdoom	9-Oct-07/6:12 PM
The feeling of the poem is expressed well! Good Job!
Re: Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar	9-Oct-07/6:15 PM
Interesting! But a little confusing! But all-in-all it's pretty good!
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-07/11:32 AM
I do not even know what to say about this one!
Re: While waiting for someone to check in my cars by INTRANSIT	16-Oct-07/3:07 PM
The poems gives a good vision of the mother and her children.
Re: Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0	18-Oct-07/11:19 AM
Too the people who gave me 0s, would you explain to me why you gave me 0s except for Rockmage because I honestly do not care what you think since you just go around giving everyone 0s!
Re: One Perfect Moment by sonawrote	19-Oct-07/12:30 PM
Good poem! I know Rockmage gave you a 1, but ignore it because he gives everyone ones or zeros. He also has like another account where he gives his poems 10s! So don't think your poem is bad just because he gave you a 1!
Re: INTELLIGENCIA by INTRANSIT	23-Oct-07/1:30 PM
To Rockmage: You have serious problems! It's not right to just go around and give everyone low scores!
Re: Suicide Note(I Blame You) by alvinb	14-Dec-07/12:06 PM
I'm just curious, but when you say your flying to the sky do you mean Heaven, cause last time I checked people who commit suicide don't go to heaven??? Otherwise the poem is decent, but I think the last 2 lines need to be changed.