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SOMETIMES? (Free verse) by Garrett S Sexton KATT SHITS IN THE TRAY.
SOMETIMES?
KATT SHITS, IN THE TRAY?
SOMETIMES, MISSES SOMETIMES HITS!
KATT SHITS IN THE TRAY.
SOMETIMES?
KATT SHITS IN THE TRAY.
SOMETIMES!
SOMETIMES, JUST SOMETIMES.
KATT WILL JUST SHIT!
Up the ladder:
Over you
Down the ladder:
Black streets of Hackney
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Posted: March 29, 2006 11:25 AM PST; Last modified: March 29, 2006 11:25 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.2689414 Overall Rank: 3847 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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Garrett S Sexton @ 86.142.147.68
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29-Mar-06/12:22 PM
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So you don't like it then Mr. or Mrs. Anon. You could at least say why. All criticism is valid. P.S. I am now 30.
IN THE TRAY?
KSKSKSKSSK
Is this for some reason almost funny? Or just acutely sad? Garrett - this seems to be pure unadulterated shit.
Or is it just me?
It's not just shit; it's in the *tray*, Matt.
I like this. Something very autistic savant about it.
I gave this a 0 because not only is this poem about shit it really is a piece of shit!
I love it, a bit weird but still gr8 BUT there is just one thing its all about cat shit!
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