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One Perfect Moment (Free verse) by sonawrote
We walked in the forest for peice of mind, some solitude
we went far from everyone just woods for miles, not a sound
we found our place under sunny skies, amist satin floral beds
you could have heard a butterfly flutter, I only hear your breath
your eyes look into me,opening the window that bears my soul
I open it freely,letting this moment absorb its place in memories
could not have been more perfect, more peaceful, more open than this
I sigh and rest with you a moment, for you took my breath away
a tear rolls down my cheek, and my heart bleeds for the words I cannot
say
without a sound you tell me, not to think of when you're gone with your
eyes
I touch these lips, I hold your heart, as you hold mine, I draw it all
inside,
for one perfect sunny afternoon, I smell the flowers, I see the sun,
I breathe the simplicity and ease of being so free
I lock it all away inside my soul for when you're gone
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Overall Rank: 8606
Posted: October 18, 2007 10:27 PM PDT; Last modified: October 18, 2007 10:27 PM PDT
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