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One Perfect Moment (Free verse) by sonawrote

We walked in the forest for peice of mind, some solitude we went far from everyone just woods for miles, not a sound we found our place under sunny skies, amist satin floral beds you could have heard a butterfly flutter, I only hear your breath your eyes look into me,opening the window that bears my soul I open it freely,letting this moment absorb its place in memories could not have been more perfect, more peaceful, more open than this I sigh and rest with you a moment, for you took my breath away a tear rolls down my cheek, and my heart bleeds for the words I cannot say without a sound you tell me, not to think of when you're gone with your eyes I touch these lips, I hold your heart, as you hold mine, I draw it all inside, for one perfect sunny afternoon, I smell the flowers, I see the sun, I breathe the simplicity and ease of being so free I lock it all away inside my soul for when you're gone

Skamper 22-Oct-07/10:19 PM
if this is a true account of a time in your life - tell of something that has a personal touch, for readers to connect to the melancholy of it all. Otherwise it's just nothing, a blurb on the back of a romance novel...




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