replying on Suicide Note(I Blame You) by alvinb
20 Dec 2007, 2:17 PM
For one thing i'm not a man! And I wasn't getting biblical. It's common sense that people who commit suicide don't go to heaven, and i didn't mention the bible! But i'm glad you agree that people who commit suicide don't go to heaven!
on Suicide Note(I Blame You) by alvinb
14 Dec 2007, 12:06 PM
I'm just curious, but when you say your flying to the sky do you mean Heaven, cause last time I checked people who commit suicide don't go to heaven??? Otherwise the poem is decent, but I think the last 2 lines need to be changed.
replying on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0
28 Oct 2007, 12:28 PM
And it's America not amerika get it straight!
replying on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0
28 Oct 2007, 12:27 PM
No I'm not talking about vietnam! I wasn't even alive when vietnam occured! I'm not talking about any particular war! Do you even realize how hard it is for our troops when every one in America is complaining about the war! It's an honor to fight for ones country, and I am proud of them!
replying on INTELLIGENCIA by INTRANSIT
23 Oct 2007, 6:57 PM
Haha I just don't think it is fair that a good poem gets a 0 or a 1 just because some jerk feels like it!
on INTELLIGENCIA by INTRANSIT
23 Oct 2007, 1:30 PM
To Rockmage: You have serious problems! It's not right to just go around and give everyone low scores!
replying on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0
23 Oct 2007, 1:27 PM
No it's not a dream! And it's not temporary if it was he would have let go!
replying on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0
21 Oct 2007, 3:37 PM
Thanks! I get what you are saying!
replying on The American Soldier by x0lovelylarnx0
21 Oct 2007, 12:29 PM
I do know what they are doing! They are serving our country, and risking their lives! Once again this is a very old poem of mine, and who said that I was talking about the war going on now!
replying on Soccer by x0lovelylarnx0
21 Oct 2007, 12:27 PM
haha well this poem is sort of old, but i am still young and it's hard to find things to write about cause I don't have a lot of experiences to write about yet.
replying on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0
21 Oct 2007, 12:24 PM
Haha My name is lauren not larry! I'm defintely not a dude! But i see what your saying. And it's not that critcism bothers me and that I don't want to work hard, it's these people who go around giving zeros to everyone. Honestly, I do not think it deserved a 0. But thanks for the help!!
on One Perfect Moment by sonawrote
19 Oct 2007, 12:30 PM
Good poem! I know Rockmage gave you a 1, but ignore it because he gives everyone ones or zeros. He also has like another account where he gives his poems 10s! So don't think your poem is bad just because he gave you a 1!
replying on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Oct 2007, 12:27 PM
Why thank you! I finally got a good comment!
replying on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0
18 Oct 2007, 7:06 PM
I'm not getting touchy! And yes I'm here for criticism, but i'm her for reasonable criticism not the same thing written on every single poem of mine that you rate!
replying on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0
18 Oct 2007, 11:31 AM
is that like all you know how to say is too many words!?
replying on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0
18 Oct 2007, 11:20 AM
It's Poetry I can have as many words as I want!
on Never Let Go by x0lovelylarnx0
18 Oct 2007, 11:19 AM
Too the people who gave me 0s, would you explain to me why you gave me 0s except for Rockmage because I honestly do not care what you think since you just go around giving everyone 0s!
on While waiting for someone to check in my cars by INTRANSIT
16 Oct 2007, 3:07 PM
The poems gives a good vision of the mother and her children.
replying on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0
15 Oct 2007, 11:17 AM
Got Ya! lol Slow much! If I find time I might try to re-do this poem. I never have time to relax and find my own style!
replying on The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0
14 Oct 2007, 12:41 PM
your last sentence doesn't make since to me! lol