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Heart Cancer

Member since 2004 · Posted 21 Jul 2004 · 2 comments

I went through some examinations To find out what was my disease And suffered medical interventions To fix this wrong there was in me I should have known right from the start There was a cancer in my heart They went throguh all the Medicine Needles, pills and homeopathy But little daily doses of Aspirin Coulnd´t heal the great Melancholy Yes they tried really hard To cure this cancer in my heart No bacteries or virus detection Just sad symthoms to feel I knew there was some infection With that constant freezing chill A growing willing to depart Caused by the cancer in my heart The pain insisted, years had gone Doctors gave me some excuse Some other research had to be done And I had nothing more to lose I bought a knife, a very sharp And killed the cancer in my heart

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[10] x0lovelylarnx0 21-Jul-04/4:48 PM Reply
That was very touching.
[n/a] Bachus 23-Jul-04/12:51 AM Reply
This is a parody just begging to dance on your face.