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bitten {one liner}

Member since 2007 · Posted 2 Jun 2007 · 1 comment

he burnt my lips {like fireflies} on Summer’s hot cement

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[n/a] richa 16-Jun-07/1:53 PM Reply
enough with the redundant parentheses. and shouldn't it be a firefly presuming the firefly is the 'he' part of the simile