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bitten {one liner} (Other) by sca
he burnt my lips {like fireflies} on Summer’s hot cement


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5109
Posted: June 2, 2007 10:14 PM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2007 10:15 PM PDT
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[n/a] richa @ 85.210.32.212 | 16-Jun-07/1:53 PM | Reply
enough with the redundant parentheses. and shouldn't it be a firefly presuming the firefly is the 'he' part of the simile
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