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bitten {one liner} (Other) by sca he burnt my lips
{like fireflies}
on Summerâs hot cement
Up the ladder:
Baggage (3rd ending)
Down the ladder:
Hold and hold me hold tight
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Posted: June 2, 2007 10:14 PM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2007 10:15 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1589375 Overall Rank: 5163 Comments:
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richa @ 85.210.32.212
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16-Jun-07/1:53 PM
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enough with the redundant parentheses. and shouldn't it be a firefly presuming the firefly is the 'he' part of the simile
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