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bitten {one liner} (Other) by sca

he burnt my lips {like fireflies} on Summer’s hot cement

richa 16-Jun-07/1:53 PM
enough with the redundant parentheses. and shouldn't it be a firefly presuming the firefly is the 'he' part of the simile




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