Re: Mornings by alvinb	Dovina 208.127.228.72	12-Feb-11/8:09 PM
I hate these boring suicide poems!
Re: Late Song by nypoet22	Dovina 208.127.228.72	12-Feb-11/8:08 PM
I gave up after the first verse. Get specific or get out!
Re: tree in a flood by Skamper	Dovina 208.127.228.72	12-Feb-11/8:07 PM
Hey, settle down, its all too fast. Delayed gratification. Yes, please, make it last!
Re: courtyard by lmp	amanda_dcosta 82.178.138.236	26-Nov-10/11:10 AM
Very nice feel to this short verse. Picturesque.
Re: a comment on Best friends by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 82.178.138.236	26-Nov-10/11:04 AM
Yeah, something like that Dovina. Experiences do have a way of reflecting itself in what we write. Thanks for the vote.
Re: Best friends by amanda_dcosta	Dovina 75.84.73.162	16-Nov-10/10:14 AM
Sounds like the mother of a good son or the memory of a child with a good brother
Re: dictates of whose travel agency? by A. Nomaly	A. Nomaly 61.90.124.118	9-Nov-10/3:01 AM
fixed, five years later, hey I'm lil slow
Re: Poemranker is Back! by Dovina	lmp 72.79.209.72	5-Nov-10/6:18 PM
was it gone? i missed the downtime....
Re: The Christian Submariner by Sing4Jesus!	rabbi sammy schtupp 194.83.172.121	23-Oct-10/6:46 AM
Fucking awful.
Re: driftwood by ThePariahDog	Dovina 111.88.56.68	11-Oct-10/12:33 AM
I remember the ancient times when, if memory presents truth, you were young and wrote young. Now this is good, shrouded just enough. Poemranker is abandoned now, all hands jumped ship. It must leave an able seaman wondering why he signed on.
Re: white whale by ThePariahDog	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.10.118	24-Sep-10/4:51 AM
Odd. Try getting more comments by submitting it to: http://ednaspoetrysite.proboards.com ? I would if I were you...
Re: puppy love by Freethinker1602	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.10.118	24-Sep-10/4:49 AM
This is a delightful poem about a puppy, albeit with some grammatical errors. Why not submit it to my lovely new website: http://ednaspoetrysite.proboards.com ? I would if I were you...
Re: The Cat Goddess by nypoet22	Edna Sweetlove 212.139.234.89	21-Sep-10/5:09 AM
Miaow.
Re: Reunification, the Pong by http://mulberryfairy	Edna Sweetlove 212.139.234.89	21-Sep-10/5:08 AM
Sounds like a typical American city rather than Germany.
Re: puppy love by Freethinker1602	nypoet22 75.74.32.242	16-Sep-10/1:09 AM
sincere, if imprecise.
Re: Poemranker is Back! by Dovina	nypoet22 75.74.32.242	16-Sep-10/1:08 AM
simple, elegant, i like it! ;)
Re: Holy Spirit - A Tanka Poem by amanda_dcosta	nypoet22 75.74.32.242	16-Sep-10/1:07 AM
i like the form, and the last line. the rest, however, needs work in my view. the adjectives are standard.
Re: Chasing Droplets by dinah	nypoet22 75.74.32.242	16-Sep-10/1:04 AM
i like the overall sentiment. this feels like it hasn't been edited yet. write it however you like, but i would write it: I am cursed. I give yet receive nothing. I gave everything. Now I'm stuck, sitting on the dead orchid petals you keep watering for the illusion of life. I desire freedom. give me back my body.
Re: IN THE OUTPOST OF WORDS by daggatolar	nypoet22 75.74.32.242	16-Sep-10/12:57 AM
i don't mind the language - clever enough - but the emotional content i find a bit dry. maybe that's the whole point, but i'm not really feeling it.
Re: Prospects by http://mulberryfairy	nypoet22 75.74.32.242	16-Sep-10/12:54 AM
very personal free-verse. in general i liked it. the third segment seems kind-of unnecessary, at least as its own distinct unit. if not, i would reverse the order of II and III. the end of III and beginning of II have an obvious connection, and "why are you here?" is a much better ending place.