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IN THE OUTPOST OF WORDS (Free verse) by daggatolar
Not all face is fear held hostage In the making of a mask words come against meaning the Drum does the dancing and the feet not tied down tired out of life can learn how to wander in the outpost of words To think in the inside of your head Words are missing not letters is a new suffer of crushing out so we make do of our living out pour of life out in droplets

Up the ladder: HATE ME, LOVE
Down the ladder: will not heal

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.0474257
Overall Rank: 6869
Posted: August 2, 2010 5:36 AM PDT; Last modified: August 2, 2010 5:36 AM PDT
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[n/a] http://mulberryfairy @ 76.24.243.64 | 29-Aug-10/9:18 PM | Reply
I like it all, especially 2nd verse, but am distracted by 1st line and 11th
[7] nypoet22 @ 75.74.32.242 | 16-Sep-10/12:57 AM | Reply
i don't mind the language - clever enough - but the emotional content i find a bit dry. maybe that's the whole point, but i'm not really feeling it.
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