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dictates of whose travel agency? (Free verse) by A. Nomaly
but these certain ones are like you, I see them once a year so of course I will pay to go not going to every little event it's so not fair I have to keep visiting you

Up the ladder: fleeting thoughts
Down the ladder: I Adore

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5892
Posted: October 7, 2005 8:16 AM PDT; Last modified: November 9, 2010 3:00 AM PST
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[8] zodiac @ 213.186.184.106 | 8-Oct-05/3:47 AM | Reply
No apostrophes in the title. Anywhere. Correct would be "dictates of whose travel agency". Want to call me anal? Go ahead. At least I'm not illiterate, and anal people still get laid, apparently.
[n/a] ALChemy @ 69.134.78.74 > zodiac | 9-Oct-05/8:33 AM | Reply
"and anal people still get laid, apparently."
You really left yourself wide open on that one my friend.
[8] zodiac @ 212.118.19.108 > ALChemy | 10-Oct-05/4:31 AM | Reply
Heh, heh. Wide open.
[8] zodiac @ 212.118.19.155 > zodiac | 13-Oct-05/2:24 AM | Reply
I noticed you still didn't drop the apostrophe from dictates.
[5] Dovina @ 209.247.222.94 | 12-Oct-05/5:34 PM | Reply
Travel agencies don't dictate; they sell. Doesn't matter, I don't see what you're talking about anyway.
[n/a] A. Nomaly @ 61.90.124.118 | 9-Nov-10/3:01 AM | Reply
fixed, five years later, hey I'm lil slow
[8] nypoet22 @ 65.34.245.31 | 12-Feb-11/11:39 PM | Reply
i wonder how many people miss the point of this. conversational tone, stripped to the bone. in its own way, this works.
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