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dictates of whose travel agency? (Free verse) by A. Nomaly but these certain ones are like
you, I see them once a year so
of course I will pay to go
not going to every little event
it's so not fair I have to
keep visiting you
Up the ladder:
Some things marinate, others poison
Down the ladder:
Are your eyes
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Posted: October 7, 2005 8:16 AM PDT; Last modified: November 9, 2010 3:00 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5896 Comments:
Travel agencies don't dictate; they sell. Doesn't matter, I don't see what you're talking about anyway.
fixed, five years later, hey I'm lil slow
i wonder how many people miss the point of this. conversational tone, stripped to the bone. in its own way, this works.
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You really left yourself wide open on that one my friend.