Dovina
on NO TIME!! by Brandy_n_Cali
28 Aug 2004, 1:46 PM
I read this yesterday and did not comment because I did not understand what you are saying. Perhaps you are holding a criminal who will soon be executed. Perhaps the person is terminally ill. Something is urgent in time, but what?
I will assume you have read more than five today. Thanks.
And for those of us who have not the strength for those declarations, there is always TS Eliotâs âI should have been a pair of ragged claws, scuttling across the floors of silent seas.â But there is time, up to a point, for change, âAnd time yet for a hundred indecisions, and for a hundred visions and revisions.â
I am always questioning. Faith, logic, and death are subjects that donât rest well when put together in my head. Most people in the world settle on some religion to help them through the dilemmas and conflicts these three present, and they hold to the ideals of their upbringing or to others they have found along the way. They build elaborate doctrinal structures and elaborate cathedrals, which seem to anchor them to what they hope is true. Religion is important because it provides comfort in their times of need and grief. I often wish I could be so comforted.
don't know what to think for sure. the style is new to me, and it seems a bit forced in places. Overall a good pome tho'
its funny.
Important for what?
The answer to the question your poem asks is not in churches it is true. It's not in the sky nor in the forests either. Maybe it's in RLS's Requiem "Home is the sailor, home from the sea, And the hunter home from the hill." Or Donne's(?)" Glad did I live/And gladly die/And I lay myself down with a will." Good thought-provoking poem. One point better than your personal average. -10-
The two poems preceding these comments are the best I've ever posted on poemranker. I'd forgotten them.
i like this poem it's really good
nice.
weird. not good.
true.
...reminds me of her.
feelings of depression. the hardened heart cant allow warmth in anymore. after a breakup i suppose. nice. although the rhyming here "My heart's numb
I feel dumb" is....a little forced maybe.
i like this one. the ghost is obviously your own reflection.
but i dont understand some parts. "He came again last night
To remind me of you"