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Dovina on NO TIME!! by Brandy_n_Cali 28 Aug 2004, 1:46 PM
I read this yesterday and did not comment because I did not understand what you are saying. Perhaps you are holding a criminal who will soon be executed. Perhaps the person is terminally ill. Something is urgent in time, but what?
Dovina replying on A Piñon Planter by Dovina 28 Aug 2004, 1:36 PM
I will assume you have read more than five today. Thanks.
Dovina replying on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 28 Aug 2004, 1:34 PM
And for those of us who have not the strength for those declarations, there is always TS Eliot’s “I should have been a pair of ragged claws, scuttling across the floors of silent seas.” But there is time, up to a point, for change, “And time yet for a hundred indecisions, and for a hundred visions and revisions.”
Dovina replying on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 28 Aug 2004, 1:27 PM
I am always questioning. Faith, logic, and death are subjects that don’t rest well when put together in my head. Most people in the world settle on some religion to help them through the dilemmas and conflicts these three present, and they hold to the ideals of their upbringing or to others they have found along the way. They build elaborate doctrinal structures and elaborate cathedrals, which seem to anchor them to what they hope is true. Religion is important because it provides comfort in their times of need and grief. I often wish I could be so comforted.
sliver on Lachrymose by affei09 28 Aug 2004, 1:14 PM
don't know what to think for sure. the style is new to me, and it seems a bit forced in places. Overall a good pome tho'
darylchew on Octopussed by <{Baba^Yaga}> 28 Aug 2004, 11:28 AM
its funny.
INTRANSIT replying on Surfer by INTRANSIT 28 Aug 2004, 10:22 AM
Thanks guys. Had to edit. The opening line didn't jive with the closer. Had to make him more active.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on St. Patrick’s Cathedral by Dovina 28 Aug 2004, 9:57 AM
Important for what?
The answer to the question your poem asks is not in churches it is true. It's not in the sky nor in the forests either. Maybe it's in RLS's Requiem "Home is the sailor, home from the sea, And the hunter home from the hill." Or Donne's(?)" Glad did I live/And gladly die/And I lay myself down with a will." Good thought-provoking poem. One point better than your personal average. -10-
zodiac replying on Sir Magnedrol vs. The Dragon (part 1) by Phalkon 28 Aug 2004, 7:49 AM
The two poems preceding these comments are the best I've ever posted on poemranker. I'd forgotten them.
Prince of Void on Haiku Moon by [mojo] 28 Aug 2004, 6:18 AM
i like this poem it's really good
darylchew on Haiku by Cha no Onna 28 Aug 2004, 2:17 AM
nice.
darylchew on hurt by yOum|n 28 Aug 2004, 2:09 AM
sometimes i feel this way too. good.
darylchew on Masculine by temptalia 28 Aug 2004, 2:07 AM
nice imaging. i could almost imagine it.
darylchew on this one is for Jon by tstormer 28 Aug 2004, 2:05 AM
weird. not good.
darylchew on Just A Dream by Blindpoetry 28 Aug 2004, 2:05 AM
true.
darylchew on Your Great by scitz 28 Aug 2004, 2:04 AM
...reminds me of her.
darylchew on Broken by psychedelic 28 Aug 2004, 2:00 AM
feelings of depression. the hardened heart cant allow warmth in anymore. after a breakup i suppose. nice. although the rhyming here "My heart's numb I feel dumb" is....a little forced maybe.
darylchew on Ghost in My Swimming Pool by ObiWonKn 28 Aug 2004, 1:57 AM
i like this one. the ghost is obviously your own reflection. but i dont understand some parts. "He came again last night To remind me of you"
affei09 on Insomnia by BiggRobb 28 Aug 2004, 1:54 AM
cute!