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Dan garcia-Black on Solitude by Dovina 14 Sep 2004, 12:00 AM
Why do we choke on "a spiral in Phi?" Pray tell, what does it mean Phi not Pi? -9- for being alone in your "phi-ness."
Just knock up a neighbor's daughter. You'll be paying for that mistake the rest of your life.
Dan garcia-Black on Band Ten Hut by LintyWeenis 13 Sep 2004, 11:53 PM
I can't blow horn worth a damn but I understand 'cause I play harp in a blues band.
zodiac replying on Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry 13 Sep 2004, 10:26 PM
Is your argument that if it weren't for the trivial fact that smoking is scientifically proven to kill you and everyone around you, smoking would be entirely good while nonsmoking would be somehow less-than-entirely good; and science is bunk anyway and proven by yogis to be the opposite of true every time? Congratulations! 100 points!
Blue Magpie on Solitude by Dovina 13 Sep 2004, 10:02 PM
Dear Dovina, While this is obviously a pretty picture the language usage does not appear to be very poetic to meeither in its use of metaphor etc, or in its imagery presentation, and there is not rhyme or rhythm. "A picture in Phi" what does this offer us phi "Φ" being the 21st letter of the Greek alphabet, the Greek equivalent of "F", a circle with a line through it, doesn't inspire me with images relevent to seashells or hermit crabs or solitude. So I am sorry but I just don't see the poetry here, just prose.
LintyWeenis on Run Material Girl by singinkygal 13 Sep 2004, 7:44 PM
Interesting.
LintyWeenis on save by calliope 13 Sep 2004, 7:41 PM
Eh, I'm a meat-eater, what can I say?
wilco on A Choice by Dovina 13 Sep 2004, 7:41 PM
I rather like "They make me glad". Pure simplicity. Thats the way I like it.
Intrigue. Shortness. -8-
LintyWeenis on Band Ten Hut by LintyWeenis 13 Sep 2004, 7:33 PM
You probably won't get this unless you've been in a Marching Band before. And if you haven't, I hope that this poem helps paint a picture.
wilco on Your Embrace by Brandy_n_Cali 13 Sep 2004, 7:32 PM
Naughty, which is kind of nice. I think though, that this kind of thing is better said with a less graphic tone. Not that I'm trying to say that i'm offended or anything. I just think it would be a better poem for it.
wilco on Grandpa's boat by Caducus 13 Sep 2004, 7:28 PM
I like it.
wilco on Solitude by Dovina 13 Sep 2004, 7:24 PM
A spiral in phi? I like the sentiment behind it, but I'm just not feelin' this one D.
Prince of Void on Solitude by Dovina 13 Sep 2004, 6:52 PM
I love the word solitude...u know there is a short-film called "depth of solitude" in that film i really get the depth of solitude ..and its concept was wonderful
Bachus on Drunk and Fucked Up by wilco 13 Sep 2004, 6:40 PM
Decent
Yes they do if the residue is poisonous-get meh?
Bachus on Seamus McGee by TLRufener 13 Sep 2004, 3:24 PM
Ace!
Bachus on take it easy by skaskowski 13 Sep 2004, 3:21 PM
It's like eating vagina, but while being a midget.
Bachus on happiness prescribed by erickvisions 13 Sep 2004, 3:19 PM
Heroin kicks ass
Bachus on Ichobod Racecar by T. Jonathron Remp 13 Sep 2004, 3:19 PM
"it's" should be its