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Keep Your Mouth Shut and Your Gun Loaded

Member since 2004 · Posted 13 Sep 2004 · 5 comments

I guess that my white collar makes my blue-collar bitching seem less convincing. But Iâm afraid that when all the debts been paid Iâll have nothing left to do.

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5 comments

[8] LintyWeenis 13-Sep-04/7:34 PM Reply

Intrigue. Shortness. -8-

[10] Dan garcia-Black 13-Sep-04/11:56 PM Reply

Just knock up a neighbor's daughter. You'll be paying for that mistake the rest of your life.

[8] Dovina 14-Sep-04/10:05 AM Reply

Nothing left to do but blue collar bitching when all the debts are paid? I must be missing something.

[7] horus8 14-Sep-04/11:34 PM Reply

Yeah?

[6] ay deee 12-Sep-05/9:36 PM Reply

i like a short verse, but i don't know...
"makes" and "i'll have" make it a little off.
but i'm no stickler for grammar.