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Ichobod Racecar (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
Let's discuss for a minute A future of noise, Of banging and clanging and ridiculous Toys, Let's discuss for a second a beautiful Crescent-- Moon shiver sliver on the tip of my finger, Dolloping like the doves do(n't) on sour cream and whiskers. Of a cylindrical mave, an enclave of onion dust: A future where the river must cling to it's Gypsy heritage. Or "Romani" as they call themselves. Please research more their beautiful past.

Up the ladder: Cranberry shoes
Down the ladder: Cat Feet

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.285714
Weighted score: 5.614723
Overall Rank: 2214
Posted: September 11, 2004 5:48 PM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2004 5:48 PM PDT
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[5] LintyWeenis @ 152.163.101.10 | 11-Sep-04/5:52 PM | Reply
It's the strangest thing, I can't help but read your stuff. It's not the best thing I've ever read, far from it, but I keep reading it. So bonus points there.
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp @ 24.107.141.99 > LintyWeenis | 11-Sep-04/5:56 PM | Reply
Thank you!
[9] patty t @ 24.156.158.81 | 12-Sep-04/6:15 PM | Reply
don't they call themselves the 'roma'? -9-
[8] Bachus @ 24.130.62.63 | 13-Sep-04/3:19 PM | Reply
"it's" should be its
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