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upon driving through rural Washington (Free verse) by david
As I drive through farm country,
a damp reek brewing by the roadway
hits me. Manure, cut grass, honeysuckle,
spearmint. The air feels light as rusk.
I want to lie down in the newly turned
earth: this heavy figure amid the wheat-chaff and the chicory,
while sunlight creeps up a mountainside
off in the distant whelm of colour.
Each cemetery, flanked by poplars, looks ready
to play as a chess set. A dozen washloads
blow on the line, sock lanterns ablaze,
towles bellied like a schooner's spinnaker.
In a dogwood's petalled salon, bees leave
their pollen footprints as calling cards.
The occasional samba of a dragonfly
tightens the puffy-lidded dusk.
Clouds being to curdle overhead. And I want
to lie down with you here again in this boggy dirt,
our legs rubbing like locusts'.
I want you here with the scallions,
sweet in the night air, to lie
down with you one more time,
heavy in my arms, and take root.
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Posted: June 25, 2004 12:30 PM PDT; Last modified: June 25, 2004 12:30 PM PDT
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