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Ongoing (Free verse) by tadpole
Life traced as a breath and a heart beat Some fast others slow Too many too often wasted One day all will know Thoughts and idleness kept to myself No concern since nobody sees A farce sometimes kept contently by me My convinced ignorance is only a tease
Up the ladder: Morning City
Down the ladder: Cranberry shoes
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.285714
Weighted score: 5.614723
Overall Rank: 2250
Posted: December 21, 2003 8:38 PM PST; Last modified: December 21, 2003 8:44 PM PST
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[n/a] tadpole @ 24.55.117.36 | 21-Dec-03/8:45 PM | Reply
just wanted to start a poem
[9] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 22-Dec-03/12:30 AM | Reply
not bad.
[10] sliver @ 63.189.17.188 | 22-Dec-03/9:02 PM | Reply
Anxiously awaiting more. Good thoughts, eternity is waiting for all
[10] francis nor capule @ 210.23.227.51 | 19-Apr-04/4:08 AM | Reply
not bad.not bad at all.
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