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Dovina replying on Solitude by Dovina 14 Sep 2004, 11:07 AM
Alone in my spiral, as natural for me as the coil of a seashell, as right as a falcon’s dive. (See above)
Dovina replying on Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry 14 Sep 2004, 11:05 AM
Smoking is cool because you think it is cool. That's an opinion about how it looks or feels.
Dovina replying on Solitude by Dovina 14 Sep 2004, 11:01 AM
You have come back for another look at one of similar facial dimensions.
fevriere on ending by Eline 14 Sep 2004, 10:54 AM
Succinct. The kind of poem that sticks in heads. Yum.
fevriere on Redemption by leigh137 14 Sep 2004, 10:53 AM
I think wrong/right should be right/wrong so that it doesn't rhyme. I like how chatty it is. :)
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry 14 Sep 2004, 10:52 AM
I propose we discuss whether or not smoking is cool. I think it obviously is cool, because nobody likes their first few cigarettes. The only thing that makes them push through this barrier is the fact that they look cool. That, and the promise of nicotine delights on the horizon.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Solitude by Dovina 14 Sep 2004, 10:48 AM
My face is plastered with the Golden Ratio. If you measure the distance from my chin to my eyes, and divide that by the distance between my pupils, you get phi. If it weren't for my wheelchair, and the colossal kidney dialysis machine I've got lashed to my bladder, I'd be beautiful.
Dovina replying on Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry 14 Sep 2004, 10:25 AM
Nice try, but of course you know that is not even close to what I was saying. If you want to discuss something, why do you insist on changing it first? If you want to discuss a new topic, why don't you propose a new topic?
Nothing left to do but blue collar bitching when all the debts are paid? I must be missing something.
Dovina replying on Solitude by Dovina 14 Sep 2004, 9:59 AM
I haven’t seen it, but solitude isn’t bad at all.
Dovina replying on Solitude by Dovina 14 Sep 2004, 9:57 AM
Apologies . . .
Dovina replying on Solitude by Dovina 14 Sep 2004, 9:56 AM
Anytime I can set two poems before someone and hear him say that only one of them he’s just not feelin’, well, that’s a good day. Thanks for honesty. Have your visited http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=111772 lately? By the way, when a peregrine falcon swoops toward its prey at close to 200 mph, it follows a curve known as a logarithmic spiral. The shortest path, of course, would be a straight one, but since a falcon's eyes are opposed on either side of its head, straight flight would require the bird to cock its head to keep the prey in sight. Nature loves the logarithmic spiral. From sunflowers, seashells and whirlpools to hurricanes and spiral galaxies, we see this form at all scales. Encoded within the logarithmic spiral is perhaps the most mystical of all numbers, phi, approximately 1.61803.
Dovina replying on A Choice by Dovina 14 Sep 2004, 9:33 AM
Thanks, glad you like it.
arduinn replying on Lost by arduinn 14 Sep 2004, 6:49 AM
ahh.. great... thanks do continue writing great pieces k..!
Mr Pig on Holocaust by Mr Pig 14 Sep 2004, 6:33 AM
This the original version to 'yellow star'
Jesus. PS-On your last, say, dozen poems, they don't.
Opinions vary, sonny.
zodiac replying on Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry 14 Sep 2004, 2:25 AM
Dan garcia-Black on take it easy by skaskowski 14 Sep 2004, 12:13 AM
Cute.
Dan garcia-Black on Your Embrace by Brandy_n_Cali 14 Sep 2004, 12:11 AM
Shouldn't "the clench of my hand" be " I clench his hard gland?"