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ending

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

you want a somewhat superstitious ending to all this chaos and delirious laughter it would be good but only after something has happened

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7 votes so far. Yours would make 8.7 votes so far

[1] johnnyfontaine23 27-Jul-02/4:38 PM Reply

what has happened? Has someone told a joke? Not you, you are the most unfunniest person since Chris Arrowsmith....

[n/a] poetandknowit 15-Aug-02/7:54 AM Reply

Maybe a full line break after laughter would slow this down a bit and let it build more slowly.

[8] fevriere 14-Sep-04/10:54 AM Reply

Succinct. The kind of poem that sticks in heads. Yum.