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ending (Free verse) by Eline

you want a somewhat superstitious ending to all this chaos and delirious laughter it would be good but only after something has happened

poetandknowit 15-Aug-02/7:54 AM
Maybe a full line break after laughter would slow this down a bit and let it build more slowly.




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