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The Word (Free verse) by Tascobar How do I feel
Today?
Let me
Think
How to
Describe.
A summation
Of
My day
In one
Word
That word is
Dazed
See also
Confused
Up the ladder:
ending
Down the ladder:
NUDIST FLEET
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.5714285
Posted: August 15, 2002 3:28 AM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2002 3:28 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.615798 Overall Rank: 12444 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.80.49
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15-Aug-02/4:29 AM
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"In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God. The same was in the beginning with God". I'll thank you to think about THAT the next time you write about The Word! Good day to you, Sir!
what the fuck?
talk about dazed and confused thats what this poem left me as.
A quality poem, Tascobar. 8. I particularly like the form you have chosen; the short sentences indicate a stunted thought process, which is what I presume you are partly alluding to in your piece. Jolly good show, old bean.
lol i think this poem is worse then the one that i previously read...the same one you so coldly judged. eh. what goes around comes around!
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