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take it easy (Free verse) by skaskowski
a sopping wet tablecloth draped over the empty doorframe kept you out of your house all night. And I was like, "Are you afraid of water?" And you said, "No. I've just never tried to walk through a sopping wet tablecloth when i was drunk before."

Up the ladder: Life's Work
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2538
Posted: September 13, 2004 10:11 AM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2004 10:11 AM PDT
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Comments:
[7] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.145 | 13-Sep-04/11:10 AM | Reply
a nice poem
[9] Bachus @ 24.130.62.63 | 13-Sep-04/3:21 PM | Reply
It's like eating vagina, but while being a midget.
[8] Dan garcia-Black @ 66.159.217.143 | 14-Sep-04/12:13 AM | Reply
Cute.
[10] sliver @ 63.189.1.34 | 7-Nov-04/2:02 PM | Reply
Probably more worried about the transition.
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