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JoyLuck on For China by Fear of Garbage 7 Mar 2005, 6:48 PM
i just wanna say... CHINA!!!!!!
some deleted user on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle 7 Mar 2005, 5:51 PM
I disagree that the foetus should have its day in court.
dancin_n_da_moonlite on Thundershowers and my best friend by NeeMan 7 Mar 2005, 5:53 PM
i absolutely love this 100%! - 10 - -megan
nentwined on Evacuation harnessed angel Vs. The antichrist by Bachus 7 Mar 2005, 4:39 PM
Hmm. I gave this a 6 back in the day. Today I give it a 10. It made me laugh.
nentwined on some deleted poem 7 Mar 2005, 4:44 PM
"has he took my place"? The forced rhymes and rhythm turn me off entirely. Sorry. A poem only a (your?) father could love? I feel like you must have gone down the medicrity checklist to pull this off. I'll have to read more of your stuff to see if this is typical. I didn't expect it of you, though I can't remember where my expectation came from.
nentwined on Bugs by INTRANSIT 7 Mar 2005, 4:46 PM
monochrome doesn't seem right. sepia? I like where it starts. The ending doesn't cinch it closed for me, though.
nentwined on The Snow Globe by Caducus 7 Mar 2005, 4:49 PM
I like bits of this a lot. The last stanza really doesn't work for me. The underscores in the title bug me. Dunno. 6. could be something, though.
dancin_n_da_moonlite on For China by Fear of Garbage 7 Mar 2005, 5:32 PM
intersting - i dont really get it though - megan
dancin_n_da_moonlite on A Sonnet for Barbara by PatColvin 7 Mar 2005, 5:46 PM
it is nice as a poem for your wife, but noone else, its rhymes are unimaginative and weak, and it doesnt have a lot of appeal -- sonnets are ahrd though so ill give you a 5 for effort -
dancin_n_da_moonlite on Come home by phbiscuit 7 Mar 2005, 6:02 PM
this was really good but just a tad too "sugary" - 8 - -megan
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on The Privaleged by i_am_the_popsicle 7 Mar 2005, 5:45 PM
It's interesting that suicide tends to be more prevalent during peace time. Having an enemy to fight against seems to give people a sense of purpose, and while they're busy gouging out his eyes, or stamping on his balls, Kurt Cobain is merely a whining gnat on the buttocks of their subconscious.
JoyLuck on some deleted poem 7 Mar 2005, 6:51 PM
Sometimes I feel, dan garcia-black, that i am a man trapped inside a woman's body who herself feels as if she is trapped inside a turnips exterior.
JoyLuck on some deleted poem 7 Mar 2005, 6:52 PM
fire in the hole
JoyLuck on A Prayer by that_funny_girl 7 Mar 2005, 6:54 PM
god doesn't exist but santa claus does what does this prove?
RION12 on exercise by JoyLuck 7 Mar 2005, 7:01 PM
Cool. I like the way you make everything sound so simple. I like that kind of stuff in poems. I rate this poem and poet a 10.
JoyLuck on wishes by the_poetess 7 Mar 2005, 7:03 PM
i usually wait for the signal to clear on the porno channel so i could view some boobies, but hey...look at peacocks
RION12 on Snow Sucks by JoyLuck 7 Mar 2005, 7:06 PM
Snow does suck. That sucks and good poem. I rate it a 8.
RION12 on Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL 7 Mar 2005, 7:11 PM
What is the point to this poem?
RION12 on wishes by the_poetess 7 Mar 2005, 7:17 PM
I know what you mean. I want something crazy to happen. That's way when I get the chance I go eggbomb my school. That is so much fucken fun and it's even better when my friends come with me. We fuck my school up.
the_poetess on The Chocolat Box by Samantha 7 Mar 2005, 7:26 PM
um this was weak at best, and only managed to work at all because it was supported by an outside quote - 5 -