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Evacuation harnessed angel Vs. The antichrist (Haiku) by Bachus Let's get one thing straight
I'm the darkest angel &
you're just full of shit.
Up the ladder:
Grampa Morris
Down the ladder:
Paradelle of Progress
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Posted: September 15, 2003 4:34 PM PDT; Last modified: September 15, 2003 4:35 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.5 Overall Rank: 695 Comments:
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nentwined @ 192.168.0.254
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16-Sep-03/7:06 AM
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cute, though the first and third lines seem too connected.
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
> nentwined
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16-Sep-03/4:08 PM
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Yes, they're trying to monopolize.
You may be the darkest angel. I claim no such distinction.
I am, however, the -=Darkest_ Angel=-.
telesamiticaly or figuratively? Symbolicaly, or projectively? Perhaps you're a dyslexic albino with a divinty complexion. And no cover up.
ego-check, asile -=Dark_ Angel=-, thats ego-check, asile -=Dark_ Angel=-, keep writing man
Hmm. I gave this a 6 back in the day. Today I give it a 10. It made me laugh.
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