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For China

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 Mar 2005 · 3 comments

For China, vein of smoky, sliding seas, I owe each stripe or bar that makes the mesh, The kiss that flies from mouth to mouthing bees. For Pluto, god of red disease and flesh, I owe the spit and slop of gasping toads, The hearts of marble, cut and shining fresh. To bloody, waxy peel of weeping roads, I owe each blade of grass a cry of thirst, A gloppy, spitting shriek that chokes the codes. For Flora, plant who lives by dying first, I owe the female thought of skin and bone, The mammal heart that pumps my jerking birth.

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[8] dancin_n_da_moonlite 7-Mar-05/5:32 PM Reply
intersting - i dont really get it though -
megan
[5] JoyLuck 7-Mar-05/6:48 PM Reply
i just wanna say...

CHINA!!!!!!
[9] Ranger 16-Nov-06/11:28 AM Reply
Aside from 'gloppy', this is excellent