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For China (Free verse) by Fear of Garbage
For China, vein of smoky, sliding seas, I owe each stripe or bar that makes the mesh, The kiss that flies from mouth to mouthing bees. For Pluto, god of red disease and flesh, I owe the spit and slop of gasping toads, The hearts of marble, cut and shining fresh. To bloody, waxy peel of weeping roads, I owe each blade of grass a cry of thirst, A gloppy, spitting shriek that chokes the codes. For Flora, plant who lives by dying first, I owe the female thought of skin and bone, The mammal heart that pumps my jerking birth.

Up the ladder: ..
Down the ladder: Tennessee

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.625
Weighted score: 5.7059712
Overall Rank: 1938
Posted: March 7, 2005 4:15 PM PST; Last modified: March 7, 2005 4:15 PM PST
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[8] dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 152.163.100.135 | 7-Mar-05/5:32 PM | Reply
intersting - i dont really get it though -
megan
[5] JoyLuck @ 65.60.139.26 | 7-Mar-05/6:48 PM | Reply
i just wanna say...

CHINA!!!!!!
[9] Ranger @ 62.252.32.15 | 16-Nov-06/11:28 AM | Reply
Aside from 'gloppy', this is excellent
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