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The Chocolat Box (Free verse) by Samantha
No one plans their life out on a paper Life "is like a box of chocolat you never know what your gonna get." wouldnt you like to though? following a crowd, is no box, its a paper lear. Who makes you believe, you have to look perfect? is it you, or the people around. Everywhere people try to look like the world found if the box was full that would be hard to recallect People here and people there, i am also in that dare to step out of the paper cart start your own box, to be true to your heart looking, eqnore their constant stare Paint only covers so many layers of yourself one year black, another blue, green and then pink hide up on that dust shelf would the outside influence be a link? A box of chocolat can only be unique No piece tastes the same you will be able to grow instead of the usual shrink be true to yourself is the real aim No one plans their life out on a paper "Life is like a box of chocolats you never know what your gonna get" wouldnt you like to though? following a crowd, is no box, it is a paper lear.

Up the ladder: Waiting to live
Down the ladder: Septolet Without You

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4
Weighted score: 5.0476813
Overall Rank: 6875
Posted: November 23, 2003 9:02 PM PST; Last modified: November 23, 2003 9:02 PM PST
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[10] The_Third_Isis @ 24.126.116.54 | 24-Nov-03/10:12 PM | Reply
If life is a box of chocolates make mine Godiva dahlin. This piece is unique I like it Iam true to my selve's a wink from all of us. Chucles and giggles. I crown you with a 10!
[5] the_poetess @ 205.188.116.135 | 7-Mar-05/7:26 PM | Reply
um this was weak at best, and only managed to work at all because it was supported by an outside quote - 5 -
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