Lenore
on Hey by impert&ent
16 Oct 2017, 1:31 PM
See me.
You had me at "coalishly pinched twin sink holes."
daniella
on What Bitches? Oh yeah, I'll be talkin major shit. by SupremeDreamer
15 Jan 2017, 5:30 PM
Diseloquence is your invention
Stewart Stacy
I give the comments a 7! Bravo!
Lenore
on Victoria Applesmack and the Easy to Clean Wonder-Spleen by T. Jonathron Remp
17 Oct 2017, 2:58 PM
Tardigrades need friends too!
ugh
puh lease
My heart speaks not.
It pulses with pulsars
while drinkin' at the bar
Goes cold while I'm hot
'n encourages me
to take another shot
till the last thing I see
is the blasted stars.
pulchritudinous? Wordy. Get rid of it. There's other aspects too that could use polish, and the more I think of it, the less worthy of a nine this is. The title though? SPECTACULAR@!
Just don't get all sour on my seven, aye?
this poem is amazing!!!
I love it...well done!!!!
I bet the guy who wrote this is an amazing person and really great looking....what a hottie!
ecargo! I wanted to get in touch a while back but had no way. Are you still writing?
Skating with the rays
Shellfishing suits trackwise trainers
... alors
même que
Something a bit repetitive here, and title not evocative of the imagery
Celui? Ce lui? Anyhow, nice evocation of a once in a lifetime fuck.
i feel the memories biting through. this is lovely. and i love how you are alluding to the inner man and the outer snow man at once...
Lenore
on The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
16 Oct 2017, 2:14 PM
"I wear only the best" could've been better. Yeah, that line sucks. The rest, flows like stuff that flows good.
6
Awww shucks, no husks.
The quote from the pool party has no place in the office. 4