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And on and on and on (Free verse) by nentwined
Failing, flailing
Trying to find purchase
In a barren, dusty dream of sand
That once was land
Nothing I ever do is good enough
For me. The next step overcomes
A chasm, but all I see is depth;
Or if not that, then further on is
Nothing gained in any case, just
On and on and on.
And on and on and on and on
And on.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4899
Posted: February 29, 2016 9:14 PM PST; Last modified: February 29, 2016 9:14 PM PST
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