poemranker ::And on and on and on by nentwined

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Free verse № 160145

And on and on and on

Member since 2001 · Posted 29 Feb 2016 · 2 comments

Failing, flailing Trying to find purchase In a barren, dusty dream of sand That once was land Nothing I ever do is good enough For me. The next step overcomes A chasm, but all I see is depth; Or if not that, then further on is Nothing gained in any case, just On and on and on. And on and on and on and on And on.

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[7] impert&ent 26-Aug-16/8:08 AM Reply
Something a bit repetitive here, and title not evocative of the imagery
[4] SupremeDreamer 17-Apr-18/10:58 PM Reply
Hmm.