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And on and on and on (Free verse) by nentwined
Failing, flailing Trying to find purchase In a barren, dusty dream of sand That once was land Nothing I ever do is good enough For me. The next step overcomes A chasm, but all I see is depth; Or if not that, then further on is Nothing gained in any case, just On and on and on. And on and on and on and on And on.

Up the ladder: Never Answer...
Down the ladder: missing

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4882
Posted: February 29, 2016 9:14 PM PST; Last modified: February 29, 2016 9:14 PM PST
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Comments:
[7] impert&ent @ ::1 | 26-Aug-16/8:08 AM | Reply
Something a bit repetitive here, and title not evocative of the imagery
[4] SupremeDreamer @ 127.0.0.1 | 17-Apr-18/10:58 PM | Reply
Hmm.
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