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And on and on and on (Free verse) by nentwined

Failing, flailing Trying to find purchase In a barren, dusty dream of sand That once was land Nothing I ever do is good enough For me. The next step overcomes A chasm, but all I see is depth; Or if not that, then further on is Nothing gained in any case, just On and on and on. And on and on and on and on And on.

impert&ent 26-Aug-16/8:08 AM
Something a bit repetitive here, and title not evocative of the imagery




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