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Victoria Applesmack and the Easy to Clean Wonder-Spleen (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
I went to the bakery I went to the late great finger slate And wrote a poem about Life, the Universe, and Lemon Tang: Can you blame me For this pee- Colored liquid Which exists in the Universe (and Life is also involved) Then I sat next to the dead, rotting, body of a small invisible bacterium Which pretty much happens anytime you sit Unless you happen to be sitting next to one of the Mars Rovers Although new data suggest some bacteria may have survived the sterilization process

Up the ladder: The Coast Is Never Clear
Down the ladder: Bookends

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.8333335
Weighted score: 5.7620006
Overall Rank: 1767
Posted: July 20, 2005 3:06 PM PDT; Last modified: July 20, 2005 3:06 PM PDT
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[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.151.145.220 | 21-Jul-05/5:09 PM | Reply
This poeme exudes excellence, though the title is a little too 'self-consciously zany' for my tastes. -10-
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.252.229.185 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 22-Jul-05/10:42 AM | Reply
Thank you! Yeah, the title gives it away
[n/a] Lenore @ 127.0.0.1 | 17-Oct-17/2:58 PM | Reply
Tardigrades need friends too!
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp @ ::1 > Lenore | 17-Oct-17/3:08 PM | Reply
Your liminal existence will be neither remembered nor forgotten but rather swallowed by presque-vu and digested into terminal nonexistence.
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