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The way I know it's love (Free verse) by baby_d
The way your hands run, so smoothly across my back. The way you touch, so soft and gentle, causing a shiver to run down my spine. The way your lips feel when pressed against mine. The way I wish the moment would never end. The way my hand's grasp frimly around your back, as to never to let go. The way my finger's trace the sweet, sweet... sweat that our bodies make together when we make love. The way the tone of your voice can shut out the whole world when you tell me that you love me. The way the light catches your eyes showing a promises that will never end. The way you glow when yoou smile. The way you wrap your arms around me, so soft and gentle. The way you make me feel complete when our hearts come together. The way we argue, but more importantly, the way we reconcile. The way we laugh together. The way we're there for one - another. The way we'll always be. The way I know it's love.

Up the ladder: Bookends
Down the ladder: The Coast Is Never Clear

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.8333335
Weighted score: 5.7620006
Overall Rank: 1792
Posted: November 9, 2003 12:14 PM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2003 12:14 PM PST
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[8] sliver @ 65.178.241.98 | 9-Nov-03/4:42 PM | Reply
I had to look to make sure you weren't one of our new 14 year olds, now I can say Oh no I can't.
O.K. Though. You know, I never see any comments from you. Do you expect vote's and such w/o reciprocation?
[n/a] baby_d @ 205.217.79.27 > sliver | 9-Nov-03/5:58 PM | Reply
No I am not a 14 year old. Yes I do expect votes. But I realy don't care about what are people think about what I write. I just like to share my feelings about things with other people, and if they don't like what I have to say, it don't hurt me much then.
[8] sliver @ 63.189.48.64 | 9-Nov-03/7:49 PM | Reply
I didn't mean that in a bad way, I just wanted to make certain I wasn't leaving an improper comment for a youngster, the poem is not in question, I liked it.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 163.1.146.16 > sliver | 10-Nov-03/2:54 AM | Reply
Liar. You'll never get into Jesu Park if you don't have the strength - yes that's right THE STRENGTH - to tell the truth. No doubt you'll claim the poeme genuinely was never in question, but that would only be another lie. Another example of your weakness. You are weak. Beak.
Give us a effing break will ya Dark_Angel - so what if the piece reeks of fraudulence & cliche. But its her piece & other can appreciate it if they want.But in truch i'll puck before i swallow this shit abt luv and its a 01 fr ideas but the + i'll add just fr the composition n nothingmore:o)
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.101 > ShaNoN+960317485 | 10-Nov-03/7:21 AM | Reply
What
[n/a] baby_d @ 199.170.117.184 > sliver | 10-Nov-03/2:49 PM | Reply
I was'nt taking it in a bad way. Both me and my boyfriend worked together on this. So it is meaning ful to me.
[9] darylchew @ 202.156.2.130 | 2-Oct-04/10:19 PM | Reply
very very true.
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