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The way I know it's love (Free verse) by baby_d

The way your hands run, so smoothly across my back. The way you touch, so soft and gentle, causing a shiver to run down my spine. The way your lips feel when pressed against mine. The way I wish the moment would never end. The way my hand's grasp frimly around your back, as to never to let go. The way my finger's trace the sweet, sweet... sweat that our bodies make together when we make love. The way the tone of your voice can shut out the whole world when you tell me that you love me. The way the light catches your eyes showing a promises that will never end. The way you glow when yoou smile. The way you wrap your arms around me, so soft and gentle. The way you make me feel complete when our hearts come together. The way we argue, but more importantly, the way we reconcile. The way we laugh together. The way we're there for one - another. The way we'll always be. The way I know it's love.

ShaNoN+960317485 10-Nov-03/7:02 AM
Give us a effing break will ya Dark_Angel - so what if the piece reeks of fraudulence & cliche. But its her piece & other can appreciate it if they want.But in truch i'll puck before i swallow this shit abt luv and its a 01 fr ideas but the + i'll add just fr the composition n nothingmore:o)




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