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What I Exist For (Free verse) by Dovina This moment will be a long time ago some day
a fragile treasure waiting
for some unknown assembler
to reconstruct it
from timeâs erasures
But this moment
with your hand on mine
has no precedent or portent
has never occurred before
nor could happen again
For this
I came to be
and when it ends
I will have been
Up the ladder:
Distraction
Down the ladder:
Elopement
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Posted: April 1, 2005 1:01 PM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2005 1:01 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.7620006 Overall Rank: 1798 Comments:
As we all know I'm a sucker for decently written sappy. I love how the last verse says so much, in so few words.
<3 Jason
I usually try to avoid the sappy, but must admit to its lure sometimes.
sappy or not, it works. have another
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and in the deep peace of a poet's mind
upon a lake of surreal moments of a poet
open the door of wonders
has been waited so long so far
now close to your inner eyes
it has taken you to other side
by the power is unkown
lies in somewhere in mind
to show you beyond eternity
where you are still here
but You are so far away