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Deep Translation (Triolet) by T. Jonathron Remp
Man, I don't believe in a mind Mind your manners, call to banners I got sideways fish running at me at all time Fanatics crush a lime, let me leave with my sleeve down Uncuffed, sleep rough, live lavish like a snail suit Tycoon, what's your favorite bamboo with ya Never mind, I got a sharp mind for sandals Keep ya change, Kodak, I got a fan page

Up the ladder: Thinking
Down the ladder: Mi Pais

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8855
Posted: August 26, 2015 9:54 AM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2015 9:59 AM PDT
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[n/a] impert&ent @ ::1 | 24-Jan-16/7:54 AM | Reply
Skating with the rays
Shellfishing suits trackwise trainers
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp @ 127.0.0.1 > impert&ent | 12-Dec-16/12:13 PM | Reply
Wow, you aren't very good.
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