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Uptown spell! (Other) by liya
Lounging in the cozy coffee shop couch
With Irish coffee and cookies from the pouch
Watching the traffic and people who ply
Missing my village, its serenity and smiles never sly
Startled I rouse from my reveries of years long past
For what I saw left me ecstatic but yet aghast
I saw my Mira crossing the street
In shiny leather coat and stilettos on her feet
Once she represented my bygone days of blithe and joy
When a simple village bloom was a wonder and toy
Hand in hand chasing butterflies and kites
Sharing stories of lore late into star studded nights
When did it all change, why did you go
Instead of tingling anklets now chafing heels glow
Your eyes that once sparkled with innocent dreams
Now reflect weariness or is it stifled screams?
Donât you ever long for lotus ponds and kites?
Donât you ever crave for our starry nights?
Donât you yearn to hear old village songs?
Or wake up to heavenly chirpy dawnsâ¦
But answers Iâll never educe for any of these questions
For glance she does not as she strides away to expanse
City âI sigh is both maze and spell
A virtual world, where masked strangers dwell!
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Posted: November 28, 2007 3:30 AM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2007 3:31 AM PST
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but this poem is just not my thing