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Making a Man (Free verse) by Christof
The snow is still soft, sifted in drifts
Before the crust forms.
Warm feet, rapidly cooling
In clammy boots,
Flute though the easy powder
Pocking the skinless
Whiteness of unbodied cold.
Now a hand
And a face solidify in the sun,
Running and stooping,
Scooping pawfuls to build the flat waste
Into a body
Ready to become a man.
A breathing man
Stands back, stamping and shivering,
Wondering if
With luck his daughter
Will get bored,
Worn out with snow that refuses to play,
Before she calls him,
Impatient, importuning, impolite,
To make a head.
Dread of his own irritation,
Dislike of the temper
Remembered from another father
Thirty years ago
Grown hot in his own head,
Scorches red the snow.
No father, really:
Merely a progenitor.
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Posted: April 6, 2009 6:25 AM PDT; Last modified: April 6, 2009 6:25 AM PDT
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