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Honeymoon (Haiku) by DevilTmptrss
flowers fall lovely on a turned back bed of faith gently we entwine

Up the ladder: A Dutch Peasant
Down the ladder: Feeling the dark

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.111111
Weighted score: 5.5555553
Overall Rank: 2449
Posted: July 10, 2002 12:16 AM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 12:16 AM PDT
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[8] meror @ 152.163.206.206 | 10-Jul-02/12:37 AM | Reply
lovely words and images. clear, nicely crafted
[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-Jul-02/11:07 PM | Reply
my grandmother's cockerspaniels were stuck like that for hours
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