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Feeling the dark (Free verse) by Mutant_X
it's very easy pretending to be happy all the days
when the sun fills in rays
but when you are all alone,so on your own
when the sun goes down
and yet the dawn seems too far
it becomes hard to pretend
when all the masks are off
when the times get rough
when you finally feel tired of smiling all day
it's comfortable to cry then
you let your tears
wash your soul
purify your fears
in the dark when no eyes can see you
n no ears can hear you
you feel connected to every little creature on earth
that you can hear the all
see the all
and feel the all
but yet though you feel alone in the universe
it's in the dark when the pain
softly escapes thru the palm of your hand
and the light in your eyes,whispers and dies.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.111111
Weighted score: 5.5555553
Overall Rank: 2450
Posted: September 27, 2002 5:07 PM PDT; Last modified: September 27, 2002 5:07 PM PDT
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